Try to say what you see. Example: I see a picture with a sun, clouds, an orange sky. Birds fly. I see water and land.
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Try to say what you see. Example: I see a picture with a sun, clouds, an orange sky. Birds fly. I see water and land.
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In what I see section? Or in my whole writing?
Just about in the what I see section. If after you mentioned what you see and next what you feel your text is about soup that's fine with me...
I can tell you an anecdote about why I mention soup It's because of a cartoon I saw years ago where a group of smurfs get lost in the mist. The smurf (cook/one who likes food) said as they were lost: This mist is as thick as soup. So if I see mist or something foggy it reminds me of this scene... the first picture isn't clear if it comes to the water in the background and the land.. so in my mind I see those little smurfs walk around trying to find their way...
Good way of thinking