You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: nature melodiesView the full contextwakeupkitty (76)in Dream Steem โข 11 months ago If you replace "the coach" for a synonym or 'he', 'him' your story reads better. โค๏ธ๐
Yes, that's right, friend. Thank you for the correction. I was too focused on how to convey a circle in the life cycle ๐๐
You can always edit it unless it is meant to show how you think in circles. ๐
That's right my aim was just to give a view of the circular thinking process thank you๐