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RE: Hope is Coming

in Dream Steem2 years ago

And another warm sonnet!

I like it much, and I have only one question:

Can leave our doubts and fears far behind.

In this line, I miss one syllable. Of rhythmic reasons.
Would you agree to this impression?
Or would you say: behind the word and syllable "fears", there has to be a pause, a hesitation - which then brings the true rhythm to the hearers?