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RE: The leopards legacy

in Dream Steem5 months ago

Hello there sbamsoneu :)

Your story, "The Leopard's Legacy," beautifully explores the theme of balancing Western culture and Igbo heritage through Amobi's journey. I would say that the character development is commendable, and the cultural references add significant depth.

A teeny tiny suggestion if you don't mind me: For clarity, it may help to distinguish where the story ends and the explanation begins. Additionally, incorporating the moral more subtly instead of stating it directly, could allow the readers to derive it from Amobi’s experiences and decisions.

Overall, it’s a thoughtful piece with much promise!

#microwrite

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