Hi, @sbamsoneu

Excellent friend, I enjoyed reading the new version and even more the condensation requested by the task.
That narrator- witnesses makes it great, connects us with what he believes was his mistake and anticipates an unimaginable ending. Congratulations. I value your way of writing.

Now, I go with the qualification.

Where is the title? In a micro -story, it is part of the story.

The healer character, who is given to us now is very well-developed and is magnificent, earned his story and place.

The other is your reflection. I would like to meet the author, behind the story, what did you learn from this exercise? What really led you to leave behind Amobi?

But personally I believe since I read your first story, it's him, Amobi; To whom you have to give voice. In that order, I am thinking of assigning you a special task for your graduation.

You will receive my telegram. 😉😂

Task 1: 2,47/3 pts