RESULTS: Let's Write Classifieds- Week 3

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Results

My impressions and highlights for each author:
📝 @dove11:I appreciate the author's use of the almost literal format of classified ads. Although, considering short fiction, it's good to ask whether numbers and addresses contribute to the story or are unnecessary. At least in the first one, the word Aquarius and 49 seem to go very well together; we imagine a personality. I would love to write with such a respectful tone of voice; it lends its message a sense of truth. However, upon reading the translation of the second ad, I feel you lacked a certain "malice." Although the message is a clear invitation to any man that, if he accepts, he will receive free rides in exchange for other favors. Both stories are very good. ---
📝 @venecineaudio: The condensed version's achievement is evident. The first, the boy's, sounds very modest but direct; he knows how to ask. In the second, the woman's voice is somewhat blurred, emphasizing the children, although, of course, the story needs them. However, I see in the endings, words and numbers that contribute little to the story. ---
📝 @enrisanti. A style that intrigues me. The ironic humor she imbues her stories makes them unique. She describes people we might encounter crossing the street. And her endings fit in such a way that they make us think, so strange and witty they are. I think you could still refine your style; I see words that could be eliminated and wouldn't be necessary. But I'm grateful to have you among the authors. ---

Thank you all for rewarding us with your great display of creativity.

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WINNERS

💥 🏆💱 Revealing the winner 💥 🏆💱
🥇 FIRST PLACE: @dove11, @venecineaudio, @enrisanti -- 10 SBI points each

Note: All other participants also receive 2 SBI points, Thank you for everything|
What is SBI?|

Called @disconnect or @winwithsteemit, please assign a promo code for the Steemit Lottery to the winners @dove11, @venecineaudio, @enrisanti Thanks friend!

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Some statistics

👤 Author	📝 Words
@dove11 Link	Ads 1: 50 words Ads 2: 48 words TOT: 98 words
@venecineaudio Link	Ads 1: 47 words Ads 2: 50 words TOT: 97 words
@enrisanti Link	Ads 1: 48 words Ads 2: 50 words TOT: 98 words

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Fuentes

• Imágenes
• • [1] Backgrouhd
    Las imágenes y gif son de mi creación a partir de Promts editados en Ideogram.ai. Dicha aplicación emplea la Inteligencia Artificial, para generar imágenes, a partir de frases y oraciones escritas. Estas son libres de derechos. [1] Ver mi galería en Ideogram.ai: joslud

• Translated with Google Traslate

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Original production by @joslud I'll wait for you in the next publication.

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