A poem

in Freewriters3 days ago

All day long , life goes on, children go to school, workers go to work ,farmers till the ground..
All day long...
Bird's fly in the sky animal moves in the bush, fishes swim in the sea all day long

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 2 days ago (edited)

Welcome to the freeweiters.

This is a great start and fits into the prompt: weave daily events into a free verse poem.

What I like is if I read this you feel the rush, business of people like ants running around. The way you wrote it in one piece adds extra to this busy busy busy.

All you have to do is give it a good title!

👍

 2 days ago 

Okay, thanks alot , can I write more

 2 days ago 

You can write what you like it's a good practise. A super creative weekend.

 6 hours ago 

thank you

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 2 days ago 

Thank you so much