I love your long list of revision thoughts - and how the characters evolved, independent of your original plan for them, just as our children do in real life. Kill Draven! Perish the thought! I love your daily "journal" entries that accompany each chapter - that makes reading online all the more rewarding - as opposed to seeing the book in one document, minus the daily asides. This is a great story. And for those who missed it, I love your post of 8 months ago though I hardly believe you were ever a "terrible" writer. Hold onto those adverbs--ignore those bossy editors who'd club you over the head with rules and strip your prose of its vitality and unique voice! Remember Dostoevsky!!
{Do writers write for the reader or for other writers](
https://steempeak.com/writing/@kaelci/a-literary-rant-liter-rant-if-you-will). Everyone, this is a must-read! If you know how I can resteem it, I will.