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RE: Smell of ash (freewrite)

in #freewrite7 years ago

Awa, such a touching story. Great use of the prompt.

How long does your smell wonder the world once you're gone?
How long would the homeless man's smell linger around his parents' home? But after all, who cared?

I loved how you used this sentence to switch it to his parents. Then we found out more about him and the house. Wonderful freewrite and selfie!