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RE: Day 502: 5 Minute Freewrite: Wednesday - Prompt: let's eat

in #freewrite6 years ago

It's nice to know you were that engaged in the story! A pillowy smushing sound? Only after it was done did I think that they would make a sound she couldn't have heard over the phone, but this is pacifist Frank, so it had to be something harmless. I could have said they were marinated to make them a little heavier gushy dripping sounding.