5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: Children

in #freewrite7 years ago

The hands of our future
Lies on our children
But not only them who are responsible
Also, adults who take care of them

Children today are different from children before
They have easy access to information and all
Unlike children before who struggle with time
Resources and technology wise

But it does not mean that the children's lives today
Are as easy as we think it would turn out to be
But we always put our good hopes high
That these children would turn out to be alright

Children today may be so free
Sometimes entitled because you see
Rights of every single thing is there
They might be as lucky and yet unprepared

I say this as I observe
Many children from where I grow
They no longer feel the need
To be responsible for some things, which makes me sad indeed

This is not we think it would result
But these children will certainly grow
They will be mature and surely know
Being responsible is very important for humankind and all

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Photo above is a children's performance in an inter-school competition I watched last year :D

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A beautiful message for sure. Well done!

Thank you.

It is beautiful and thought provoking at the same time.

It's the first thing that came into my mind after reading the prompt. Thanks for finding it beautiful. :)

Beautiful poem and you managed to cover so many important aspects of childhood here. I just want to shake my head when adults say that kids have it so easy these days. They just have different struggles than we did... and the technology and everything at your fingertips? Not always a good thing! I think it tends to make a lot of things harder!

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I am actually worried about the kids who are not learning basic skills anymore.
What an interesting picture!

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