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RE: It Is Time For The Freewrite To End VIII (The Last Mole)
The short story picked up slowly but the end was a brutal surprise! Can't wait for the next part!
The short story picked up slowly but the end was a brutal surprise! Can't wait for the next part!
Thank you, I see this as the beginning of the next act. I nearly cut out the first bit to focus on the bad guys, but decided I will keep it.