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RE: The Talisman : Weekend Freewrite : Abyni Always

in #freewrite7 years ago

Congratulations on the curie vote! The first two sections are totally gripping, and then the way you flipped everything on its head with that ending - brilliant! Is the brother secretly Indiana Jones, haha? Well done, a great write.

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thank you so much :)