Nothing is wrong with the post, its quite good to be honest. It really comes down to visibility on steemit which is not easy to get...that's why I stick to dtube videos because blogs usually don't get the visibility I would like, at least thats my experience. I don't think that I will participate also really busy around steemit but thank you for thinking about it. Also my experience with contests is that unless you have a lot of influence here on steemit most will not participate. I have tried a contest and it had no participants lol.