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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 6 (draft)

in #flashfiction7 years ago

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Now Gotchalk, it's time for the lesson. I'll repeat Matata's attack, but I'll add in some Nan Quan Kurash for fun.

Should be Gottschalk as that's the way you spell his last name everywhere else in the chapter. Also, that paragraph needs quotation marks at the beginning and at the end since it is spoken dialogue.