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RE: "SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid"
Student Name: @shiftitamanna
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [7.1/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided a well-detailed description of an emergency event involving your sister's cut. | Although you effectively managed the scene, adding some emotional components and describing your sister's response at that moment could make the scene more elaborative. Additionally, the real question was what you would have done if you were a first responder at that moment. | [Grade: 1.2] |
| Question 2 | Effectively described how you would manage the emergency at the roadside. | You have a very poor understanding of the DRABC protocol. You didn’t mention any of the steps of the DRABC protocol, like danger, response, airway, breathing, and circulation. You directly jumped to the circulation part. Checking for danger first and ensuring your own safety is of utmost priority. Also, calling for help is an essential component of being a first responder. | [Grade: 0.3] |
| Question 3 | Included relevant emergency contacts and provided a thorough overview of the services each contact number represents, making it a well-rounded and useful resource. | Excellent work providing emergency contacts; however, including more emergency services (e.g., natural disaster relief, national suicide prevention) would make it more comprehensive. Consider expanding each description to briefly explain how these services respond to specific emergencies. | [Grade: 1.2] |
| Question 4 | Created an illustration of the DRABC protocol, showcasing creativity in visual presentation. To be honest, I really liked the visual representation of the DRABC protocol you made. | While the illustration was a good effort, adding icons or labels and arrows would better elaborate the dynamic approach of the DRABC protocol. | [Grade: 2.4] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz accurately, fulfilling the task requirements. | Good work; 8 out of 10 questions were correct. To avoid confusion, I'd advise you to read the lesson and have a better understanding before moving on to lesson 2. | [Grade: 2.0] |
General Feedback:
Overall, you demonstrated a solid understanding of emergency management and displayed creativity in your presentation. However, focusing on the details of established protocols like DRABC will enhance your responses. Keep up the good work, and I encourage you to review the feedback provided to strengthen your understanding further.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03