Ooo I like how you played this, it has a very real immersive feeling aspect! The emotion and passion comes across so well, the blurred line between sexual obsession and romance is fantastic. I don't normally enjoy the romantic (reading or writing it) but this is great! There is something about this that is really realistic, the intimate compromise of relationships, where what people value in each other isn't what the world might, and the spice never dies!

Awww I hope I get to see more of your endings ;)