What an interesting short story, @gibic :) Gave me lots of things to think about and it's written so well, the way you move back and forth between the present and the woman's recollection is done super smoothly * ___ *
I wonder if she's really seeing what she said she saw or just believing that she saw them... And I love the final sentence, there's a strange arrogance in it, which contrasts very starkly against her character as a homeless, blind woman :)
Really cool~ Loved reading it !
Thank you spider! I'm glad you loved it. I've been trying to write more flash fiction, I really enjoyed it.
About the story, yeah, the basic idea is the irony (An eyewitness but blind, A homeless old granny but has this arrogance trait, law enforcers but they just too lazy to dig the facts). I don't have a large plot, so I just threw 'em on a scene, and see what will happen.
I'm still struggling with English writing, so the adjectives and the imageries won't be presented well on my stories. Lol. If I have enough time (and money), someday I'll convert one of my stories into a short film. Wish me luck. :D