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RE: Exquisite Corpse: Glockenspiel's Experiment, Part 4

in #fiction • 6 years ago

You continued the story pretty well! From one danger to another, I wonder what will happen to Pugnacia next :D. Also I find it cute that you only wrote her name once in the whole story.
                     
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    Thanks. Yeah, once you have the POV, you don't need to keep reminding readers the name of the character. I'd have used it more if there were more characters in this scene, but since we lost a few on the way ... ;-)

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