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RE: Creator - (a fantasy story)

in #fiction7 years ago

I'm keen to read the rest! But I can't believe she killed it. Well I can, it's believable if someone panicked but not sure it would be my first response... I think I would show people at the stall rather than shove it in a pocket. Is there a reason Millie is particularly disbelieving and scared by what happened as opposed to awed and excited?

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Apparently some foreshadowing that I cut out in edits.