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     8 years ago 

    Wow, thanks... I always wanted to write a horror story and this is my first attempt. It seems like every storyline has been done to death (no pun intended) I tried to come up with something a little bit new.

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     8 years ago (edited)

    Rich you have the experience because it seems you faced lots of those dark gods in your life. Going to war for your government....I just can't imagine but we have to be careful. They smell our weakness and vulnerability. That's when they take over our soul and there is no more good and evil . Only hell because our mind creates it.
    Horror is not my chosen genre because it touches me too deeply. I am like a sponge and after reading all chapters I don't think I can sleep Hahhaa this means you are damn good

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       8 years ago 

      Really brilliant and vivid story line even though it was abit to easy to get rid of those demons.

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         8 years ago 

        Thank you for all of your kind words!!! If you remember the demons are older than time itself... They haven't gone anywhere, they just left the narrator because he's no more use to them in prison. They'll be back... I'm already playing with ideas for the sequel! I can only write one story at a time... I have to live all the parts to feel and see what all the characters do. I don't pretend to be a good writer, I just love to do it and by being all of the people in the story I can make it real (at least to me). It's also exhausting... The Night Gods will be back- sleep well!!!

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