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RE: Forever. [a fantasy short story]

in #fiction7 years ago

Oh my! Well I love this, and it’s so beautifully written, and the characters are amazing, but @negativer, you have some ‘splaining to do! I saw where this was going and I almost couldn’t finish reading it. Wahhh! But it’s good. It’s so very very very good.

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Thanks @jayna! I do appreciate you taking the time to read it :)

I know I kind of started the story down an obvious road pretty early, but I figured if I could keep it entertaining along the way, nobody would care too much. Thank you so much for your comments :)