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RE: Challenge #02219-F029: Fallen From Grace

in #fiction6 years ago

It must be very difficult to understand that you're not privileged anymore and to get people to listen to you if they all believe that the guy with this name is that. Even his own dad is 'happy' that he is 'dead'. And those raping cases won't help him neither. I wonder how the personal will react when they figure his name from DNA test. Would they alarm his dad or the police first? :)

Great idea and very good writing! It's catchy and it makes you feel that you're in the room with him, watching his desperation while no one wants to listen to him :)

Thank you for sharing! Have a great Sunday!