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RE: Rats In The Sewers - Part 1

in #fiction7 years ago

It's a fascinating premise, and I'm interested to see how the rest of it turns out.

Point of order, though. "Racking the slide" doesn't work because the Agram 2000 doesn't have a slide. Slides are for pistols; the appropriate term here is 'charging handle'.

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Glad you're enjoying it so far. And ah, dammit. I was trying to get the gun stuff down pat with no mistakes like that. Guess I should've stuck to guns I actually know about lol. Or put in five more minutes of research next time. I'll switch it around. Thanks for the correction.

Came to say the same thing lol