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RE: Flash Story: Trapped In A Quantum Gap

in #fiction6 years ago (edited)

I love how your writing drew me in and kept me glued to my screen. You write so beautifully.

I really feared for the poor guy, he seemed stuck with time and whatever was happening there. Wait, all the "waking up and checking time" were all part of the nightmare? I hope its not gonna happen for real this time...

Oh, he is in a time loop....

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Thank you.

I am trying to bring the "action" feel we get from movies to my writing.