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RE: From The Ashes [Short Story]

in #fiction7 years ago (edited)

Nicely done Rose! I really enjoyed having the opportunity to work with you on this piece. I love how you restructured things to not only gain more accuracy but also capture more impact and symbolism with the dream sequence. Great job capturing a major, emotional transition in the character's arc. 👏

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Thank you! I really appreciate your knowledge and willingness to impart that knowledge! Your input was invaluable :)