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RE: Desafío Steemit S26-w6: Dos tiempos

in #fiction-s26wk618 days ago

Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing

Dear @tahispadron, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.65/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Good
Presentation1/1Good
My observation1/1Good
Total9.65/10

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  • You have a nice convincing story, it meets the requirement.

  • I guess John cheated on his wife for a beautiful woman, saying she has cancer. I think his subconscious should have kicked him where it hurts best so he left in a hurry.

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Me contenta saber que mi historia, cumple el requisito. Esto es sumamente importante.

Jhon, no podía con el cargo de conciencia, por faltar a su esposa.