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RE: Desafío Steemit S26-w6: Dos tiempos
Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.6/10 |
It was a great start and nicely describes how human mind get entangled in temptation.
I guess you took the story beyond two timing. The expectancy of a boy in such a relationship brought it to the level of double life.