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RE: The Unlikely Friendship

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-4: The Unlikely Friendship

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Okay
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.4/10

Feedback

  • The prompt of the contest post says, Tina was sent to the marketing department to keep a tag on expenses.

  • Tina saw the logic why Dev ignored extra expenses in some case. Your story took its own track but no conversation, or drama.

But things changed when Teena realized Dev's 'careless' style had a purpose. She was surprised to find Dev kept everything under his close watch.

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