"Wordsmiths Fiction Week 2: Season 24 – The Envelope"

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Hello, friends welcome to my post in which I have discussed "The Envelope " as part of my participation in this 👉Steemit Challenge S24W2 |


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In regards to the story of Diego based on what the tutor @waqarahmadshah brief story, I am here to share a brief continuation of the story of Diego, who was given an envelope.

From the look of everything, Diego was kind of afraid to open the envelope, so he began looking at the envelope like it might explode in his hand. Seeing the blocky letters boldly spelling his name looked scary as he saw himself as someone unable to produce offspring. The lot was empty as Diego glanced over his shoulder, which also the wind rustling the trash bags that was behind him.

Finally, Diego tore the envelope and it opened. As he looked inside he saw a single Polaroid photo which was shown to him. Diego was standing close to a gas station. Behind the gas station, he saw a timestamp in the corner of the gas station where he read the clock at 2:17 Am, which is exactly the time that the sedan usually appeared to him. However, the image was still in the camera as it wasn't taken from it.

Someone then said to him you were there too, or you have forgotten and Diego's pulse kicked up immediately. He tried to move, and he stumbled back, and he said was this a prank or what? But the photo he saw was real to him, and the more he stared at it the more he experienced a dull ache at the back of his skull as if something was trying to come out of his back.

That same night, Diego decided to stay on edge, and when it got to 2:17 Am, the sedan came back like clockwork. Diego didn't wait this time around; he took a walk outside, heart pounding over what had happened to him. At the time, Diego was unable to approach the window slowly as it was too dark; he said, "What do you want?" (Taking action)

"Have you forgotten that I am back"

Diego moved closer and did "No I can't forget such" (Taking decisions)

The man moved forward into the moonlight so he could be seen very well. Diogo froze when he looked at his face and got scared. The man said to Diego "You told me to wait for you and return back when it is time and to ensure that you remember everything before it occurs again to you".

Diego then replies what are you even saying, "what exactly happened to me this time around?" (Taking action)

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The man inside the car gave him another envelope which was bigger than the first envelope. Inside the envelope was a key and a map. As he opened what was given to him, he saw a photo of his younger sister, who went missing in 2008 as she was looking for Horrible. Again, Diego saw and read 2:27 Am in the timestamp and took action immediately. This time, it was a brown envelope he received.

In conclusion: Diego finally got happy as he discovered the whereabouts of his beautiful younger sister that got missing for long.

I am inviting; @dove11, @simonnwigwe, and @lhorgic

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Siento que la historia fe de menos a más. Me pregunto: ¿Quién está detrás de la desaparición de la hermana del protagonista? ¿Por qué la hermana de Diego apareció ahora? Además, parece que el protagonista conocía al hombre que estaba en el coche, ¿será que Diego tenía algo que ver con el secuestro de su hermana? Como puedes ver, me quedé con muchas dudas. Pero el ejercicio narrativo está muy bueno; y creo que más adelante podrías ampliarlo.

Me encantó leerte. Suerte.

I can tell you that there was a year when he was involved in a government experiment with a department that deals with the manipulation of memory and monitoring of people's behavior. However, instead of completing the project that was assigned to him, he left it and went pursuing something else. An issue arose, and his sister Maria disappeared during a control reset. He was informed that his sister never came into this world, but he remembered everything about his sister.

As for the man, he is the opposite of Diego (the version of Diego) that keeps appearing to him every 12:17.

Thanks for your support.

Jeje. Esta idea completa muy bien el relato, jeje. Me encantó leerte.

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