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RE: Wordsmiths Fiction Week 2: Season 24 – The Envelope
Hello @sameer7, thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
| Criteria | Marks |
|---|---|
| Story Setting & Word-Building: You started on a grand note "Diego's hands shook slightly as he picked up a white envelope behind the ice machine. The cold metal in the freezer was pressed against the skin, and for a while the world seemed unnaturally silent" That had all the elements of grand buildup | 2.5/3 |
| Theme & Message: I was wondering what could this mean. " he decided to check the safety documents. His heart raced when he hurt the tape again. So on the screen he saw him go to the ice machine." What tape hurt him? | 1/2 |
| Formatting & Presentation: It's okay | 1.5/2 |
| Originality & Uniqueness: You said, "But Diego knew the truth. He had freed a restless soul. And in doing so, had finally found peace with the darkest corner of his past." You didn't describe how it started and what was that darker past. That would make this story perfect. | 2.5/3 |
| Total | 7.5/10 |
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