I thought, using a long sentence with complicated verbs is better, but that is not the case. It will only hinder the readers from understanding our ideas. Hence, a simple and a clear sentence speak more weight than a verbose sentence.

I could tell you to get rid of the words hinders, hence and verbose but if it's your style, please keep them.

I guess Uni taught me to write in a more complicated and informal way, something I'm still trying to unlearn.

Less is more, but if more is more like you, trying to use less words is actually less you and might feel unnatural.

Please keep writing naturally. If it flows for you, it flows for the reader.

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