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RE: Sacrifice: A Dystopian Short Story

in #dystopia7 years ago

Good story, well executed. Made me chuckle darkly.

I actually thought you could have done without introducing Rebecca, and instead going straight from the letter to her reaction, and we realise that she's been reading about her husband's carcass usage. But that's by the by.

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Hey there - thanks for the compliment and the constructive feedback! It's much appreciated :)