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RE: Codename: machine dream (original spoken word)

in #dsound7 years ago

It's so cool @d-pend, I listen to it in Dsound. The words you say sound very touching and very rhythmic. Besides you have a soul in writing a word into a poem, you also have a soul to recite the poem with full appreciation until you feel enter into the words of poetry like a reality. I really like the way you read the poem. I can always get knowledge in a poem. I am very impressed with you. A poem is awe for you.

As my legs to move
eyes staring far ahead
I want you always smile
though I have not known you too far

I know I'm just a candle light
which is in the light of the light
but I hope this beam of light
can always be your light
when thousands of lights have been extinguished

although I do not know you
although I do not know where you come from
but you always make a new passion for me
through a word you say.

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Hi @reynakarina thanks much for your heartfelt words :-)
I appreciate you and hope you have a great day!!

Thanks again @d-pend, as you always give me a very good motivation about poetry. Hopefully I can also succeed like you in writing poetry and can share for many people. May God grant me this wish. Greetings to you... :)