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RE: Page 10 of my creator-owned comic Cyberds...meet Eagle-Leader!
Another nice page! I'm continuing to enjoy the environment and character designs. This page definitely reads a little funny. I read panel 3 before panel 2 and think most readers would do the same. The normal left to right reading flow is so ingrained it's difficult to break away from. Hope it's a helpful note for future page layouts!
I know. This ones a little wonky. Lol! It's supposed to be one long panel and then two panels on the right. I was afraid this page would come across as confusing, especially because of the overlapping panels. Thanks.