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RE: Friday Poets, Round 11, Contest and Community Building
Apparently ludic, your poem contains a deep reflection. It speaks of a life of suffering from hard blows during the trip. The voice suggests the tragedy of living without incentives. I perceive cynicism when it refers to what he had to live. Talk about the intellectual preparation, the struggle, the way traveled, but with bad luck. Something changed its course and now it became frustrating, lonely.
You communicate a lot with your writing, @yomismosoy. You are very talented. Blessings for your creative art.