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RE: Haiku Saturday, Round 10, Contest and Community Building
Here is my contribution ...https://steemit.com/photography/@prydefoltz/succulent-haiku-and-photography-for-haikusaturday
Here is my contribution ...https://steemit.com/photography/@prydefoltz/succulent-haiku-and-photography-for-haikusaturday
Hi, @prydefoltz ☻ Thanks for hosting every week ♥
Here's my comment on your post:
Begonias illuminated with beauty. Congratulations pryde.
succulent
could miss scent
of water
Both, beautiful! Gems!
If I must choose, I prefer the mystery offered by the first version. That vibrant metaphor that fills confusing connections with various associations, all with meaning in the magic of mastered haiku. Splendid, Pryde!