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RE: Friday Poets, Round 11, Contest and Community Building

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

Hardship is overwhelming:

I am a man
stunned among the dogs.

Sometimes we're a street mongrel which thinks itself a man, or a man who thinks himself better than the street mongrel. Sometimes life is just a stunned space among the dogs.

This poem is pure effect, @yomismosoy. Good!