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Cool. Does this follow the theme of weeds?

Also, all entries must be a one-stanza, traditional 5-7-5 haiku like the ones described here: http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm. I have this rule so all entries are judged on the same basis with the same rules. Can you revise?

My apologies I did not see the theme just the Haiku part I will revise it
Revised this one I'll make a new one though.

Thanks, I look forward to seeing it!