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     6 years ago 

    Very suggestive images portray the desperation of a very sensitive being struggling with his perceptions of reality that color him with chaos and helplessness and the vision that there are no exits.

    From the twilight
    I wear the color
    from the abyss
    on my shoulders
    and a vertiginous fear
    around me.

    Good job, my brother.

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       6 years ago 

      Hi, @corderosiete. Here's my comment on your post. I enjoyed reading it:

      Love the imagery, @corderosiete ☻
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      I particularly like the first half:

      From the twilight
      I wear the color
      from the abyss
      on my shoulders
      and a vertiginous fear
      around me.

      This shows me the speaker in your poem has been there in the depths of that abyss; he know what is like, and yet he's walking the plank.
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      Well penned ☻

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