RE: VDUX Happy Haiku Contest!!!

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chrislyr (62)in #contest • 6 years ago (edited)

Okay I'm back!

Title: Smiles that vanquish all lies

Hide not those smiles
Let them be seen for miles
Vanquishing all lies

6 years ago in #contest by chrislyr (62)

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vdux (60) 6 years ago

Cool! Change to "Let them be seen for miles" to fit 7 syllable 2nd line?

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chrislyr (62) 6 years ago (edited)

Okay, I did what you suggest but there seemed to be only 6 syllables in line 2?

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vdux (60) 6 years ago

Mea culpa. Ugh. You were right all along.

Did you to leave your smile on this post?

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four20 (50) 6 years ago

unless miles is said in Cali slang which makes it two syllables
Mi uls

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