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RE: A Moody Monday - constrainedwriting
wouldn't find
awork to do.
we all know the two of them
hashad a shop where they runtheretheir trade
for she knew I used to check on my friends before school
To date I still wonder
till datehow some mathematical formulae were made.
This is just a few... The structure of your sentences is actually quite.... odd.
Mainly because your sentences are made too long. Use fullstops instead of commas more, unless you're really really really describing something.
Thanks, I'll put this into consideration.