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Thank you, but this is just a short story. I don't know much about script-writing, but I appreciate the feedback.

Ure welcome, i believe it starts with a beautiful story.

Indeed. The lack in my case is that I don't know how to write the actual script itself and have little time to devote towards learning the craft. Now, if someone wanted to option my story for a TV/Movie script, I'd be more than happy to talk about a deal.