The Midnight Train || a five minute prompt
I missed my train.
It was quite painful because I had told my siblings we would meet and hang out before dark.
The train left few minutes before I arrived because I was hooked up in traffic.
I can see the train from where I stood but there was nothing I could do.
I felt helpless.
I wish I could fly.
As I narrated my ordeal at the station.
The station manager advised me to take the midnight train.
I never knew there was a midnight train.
Is it safe?
I guess there's only one way to find out.
In the end, I enjoyed the ride.
The Midnight Train was so much.
Thank you for your time...
I was expecting some screams, and crows or vampires circling around. In the end, it was the midnight train. It was definitely suitable for hanging a couple of spider webs.
I liked what you wrote, although it could have been more. I was hoping you'd elaborate.
I know what you mean.
I get the vibe to add more words but I fear I may tamper with the main message and divert the attention of the reader. Reading long post can get boring at some point and the reader can get lost in the way.
That's why I prefer leaving it short and precise.