Oh man, the way you wrote this is so entrancing. Hypnotic even! Was it the ellipsis? Was it the flow of the story? I don't know! I just knew that I had finished the story when I snapped out of my stupor. This was really well made, and it's quite unnerving. The way you framed the story really made it seem stranger than fiction. I love it!
Thanks. It was a REAL encounter a few years back. I wrote about it the next ... so that I didn't lose the way it had felt as it was happening.
Oh yeah, that's what makes it even creepier. As I said, truly stranger than fiction!