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RE: CritDay Coin - Sndbox Weekly Question

in #blog7 years ago

Thank you for participating in the @sndbox challenge, in association with Utopian.

As I read through the responses to @sndbox's question, I am getting more and more excited about the future of SMTs. Some great ideas are being proposed, and this one is no exception. You already have a great platform and infrastructure, and SMTs seems like an absolutely natural extension for what you're already doing. Kudos.

As appropriate for a project that is education based, this post is well written overall. I did, however, have a couple of issues in regards to style, grammar, and proofreading. I'll cite a couple of examples.

  • "as such the method and techniques of architectural education vary between countries" seems to be a proofreading issue. The word "such" is redundant, and looks like it may have been left over after the sentence was edited.

  • "visa-versa" should be "vice versa."

  • "Until this time" is a grammar issue. "this" is used for things that are here, or close at hand. For example, "at this time." For something in the unknown future, one should use "Until that time."

These aren't huge issues, and I found the post to be well done overall. I look forward to seeing CritDay coin become a reality.

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Thank you @didic. Really appreciate the feedback! I’ll correct those errors.

Thank you for your review, @didic!

So far this week you've reviewed 2 contributions. Keep up the good work!