My first poem (also my first post on steemit)

Well, I want to start by saying this is my first post ever (that includes my work and my thoughts) besides my shared songs on facebook or soundcloud. I always thought that no one cares what you think (of course, excepting your family and friends), or what you feel, but lately I am trying to change that and share everything that goes through my mind with steemit users :cuz' why not? (also you can get paid for what you write "That sounds awesome" - says I who still doesn't know how steemit or the coinmarket works). Enough with the chitchat . What do you think of my poem and should I post more (not necessarily poems) ? I think this image resembles (only a little) the feelings you should go through when you read it.

Monochrome

A Dream in a dream , a closed sleep ,
dark eyes , full of fustration.
I believe in an uncertain time…
Ridiculous and without any other movements
I fall in my own trap ,
but end up with countless
sinister tears in abandoned places.
Dark at feel , empty in space,
barefooted in my mind , with the face towards a hero…
What is there at this moment?
An intangible dominated by notoriety ,
Satiated by the isolation and contemplation.
I look in the dark what I can not find in red.
The hero in the creation of the unimaginable ,
from the creation of the divine which is sleeping deeply.
I love and I hate , but I feel I am alive
although I know that it begins and ends
in the dark.

P.S. : I am not sad, it's just a creation of mine that I think it deserves to be posted and possibly surpasses my other creations.!