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RE: Fiction Story : Episode 2 - The mystery of giant Arpito

in #adsactly7 years ago

I liked the story, you have a vivid imagination.

Just one thing, how did the eagles see Arpito if he was in the forest, covered under the trees? Why not have a wolf, fox or jackal attack him?

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Thanks. Let me think of how to tweak it.