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RE: Adsactly Short Story - Two Dark Sides of a Coin

in #adsactly6 years ago

When the rain stopped, everyone returned to the river. The water has retreated to the open alluvial layers on their ground, under the river they see large fish populations. Everyone is happy.
The men prepare nets to catch fish, while the women prepare the seeds for sowing. People work happily for being fed after months of misery

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I love this ending. Thanks for the great ideas and reading my story.

Hey @phanthang when everything was parched how the fish and seeds come to the river....just a thought on..

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