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RE: ADSactly Short Stories - Back Against the Wall
That was scary but we still don't know what happened to those at the bank. It's quite difficult to know the right decision to make especially when the life of a love one is involve? Great suspense there.
You know, I am glad that you mentioned the people in the bank. You see, there was a network jammer that made it impossible to make or receive calls inside the bank vault and of course there is the concrete and steel that was used to build it. The robbers screamed until they were tired. They started shooting at the Chubb door but it was too strong. They turned to the wall only to realize that it was built with reinforced steel and concrete. They were completely locked in. One of the killers threatened to kill the business manager if she did not find a way for them to get out of there.
The leader of the robbers warned him against that because he intended to hold her hostage and use her to excape the banking premises when they were finally let out. Meanwhile the third robber in the banking hall waited to hear from his colleagues and when he had waited for about fifteen minutes, he warned the people he held at gunpoint in the banking hall not to move and he went to check what had happened to them. He panicked when he saw that the vault was closed and he quickly ran out.
The bank police security saw him running out of the building and asked him to freeze to avoid making him to shoot. The robber swung around to shoot the police but the policeman was fast enough to bury one bullet in his chest as he did so. The police security wondered how that robber managed to come out of the emergency exit with a gun so he went into the banking hall to see all the staff lying face-down on the floor. Gradually, they told him their ordeals.
After Austin found his girls, the police brought them all back to the bank and started a full-scale investigation. Austin and the cash officer were able to open the vault door eventually and let the prisoners and the business manager out. The robbers gave up when they realised that they were surrounded.
One of the few stories that I have read that ended up in a happy ending. I like your imaginative skills. Hope to see more of your work so I'll check your main blog. Let's keep it coming.
You must really like to read. I did not know that someone could read the whole story and some. Thank you so much for the compliment. Unfortunately, I seldom write stories on my blog these days. I write mostly science and engineering posts there.
I must commend your creative skills. Each time there seem to be an ending you set up another great scene. You are indeed a good writer. I feel like lending your hand right now (jokes).
Austin character development is awesome. He's desperate, energetic, smart and loving. He is indeed a father.
Thumbs up bro. I will read some more.
Thanks a lot. I needed to finish :)
yeah,i am actually interested in those bank guys in the vault....great suspense tho
They came out alright. The robber it was that died.